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Ninjahero
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:34 am    Post subject: My first Cartoon Reply with quote

Hey all. I know this is not really BTiLC related, but since I frequent this board and talk with many of you, I thought I would share. Fox is having a contest to "discover" the next great holiday special. I wrote and voiced an entry, and a friend of mine did the animation.

I would love to hear what any of you think of it. The good, the bad, and the ugly. All feedback is helpful. And each view I get helps me.

Thanks in advance. I look forward to hearing what you think. Its called Heroes of Holiday.

http://www.aniboom.com/competitions/Fox/393252/Heroes-of-Holiday/
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Bazooka Goof
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ROFLMAO! Laughing

I honestly thought this was hilarious, and the animation was crisp and smooth. I guess if I had any critical comments, it would be that if there ought to be more variety in the voices, but I feel like I'm trying to nitpick. Smile
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Ninjahero
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for watching Bazooka, I really appreciate it.

Yeah, my voices definitely need some work. Hopefully the more I do it the better i will get and making each one distinct. I also think I need to pick up the pace of it a bit. It felt a little slow to me.

Thanks for the feedback pal.
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Keith
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought it was cool Wink. Who was the hot chick next to Santa?
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Ninjahero
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 10:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for watching Keith, I appreciate it.

The hot chick is Venus, the goddess of love and Cupids mother. I realized that the team was short on ladies so I decided to go above Cupids head.

She is way more fun to look at than a winged baby, don't you think?
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Bazooka Goof
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 6:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

On a side note, I'm grateful that I really did enjoy this. I've seen a few other boards where people posted links to their work, asking for feedback... and it's too atrocious for me to even be constructive in my criticism. Embarassed
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Ninjahero
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Albert. I appreciate you watching.
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